读后续写微技能无灵主语导学案5迎检课.docx

读后续写微技能无灵主语在写作中的应用

Objective：学会在写作中运用无灵主语。

概念

1.导入

Thesightofthescenefilledmewithhorror.

1949witnessedtheestablishmentofChina.

OurschoolhallwillseethelectureonTangpoetry.

Thethickfogblanketedthefield.

Couragedesertedher.

＊句子采用“无灵主语”(inanimatesubject)，表示抽象概念、心理感觉、事物名称或时间、地点等，但谓语却常常使用“有灵动词”(animateverb)。表示人或社会团体的动作和行为，这类句子往往带有拟人化(personification)的修辞色彩。“无灵主语+有灵动词”

原因

Ihavelearntfromlifethatsuccessisnotfinal.SoIalwaysstayhumbleandneverletitgotomyhead.

________________thatsuccessisnotfinal.SoIalwaysstayhumbleandneverletitgotomyhead.

避免重复

Therehasbeenanincreaseinviolencefromillegalgunsinthepast2years.

_________________________anincreaseinviolencefromillegalguns.

增添生动性

Ifwerelytoomuchonmouseclicking,itwillmakeuslazierbothmentallyandphysically.

_________________________makes?uslazierbothmentallyandphysically.

简洁

Wecarriedoutmoreexperimentsandfoundsomeexcitingresults.

__________________________gaveussomeexcitingresults.

目的

II.无灵主语种类(ObserveSummarize)

Group1:Panicseizedher.

Despairchokedherwords.

Agreatsenseofrelieffloodedoverhim.

Fearslowlycreepsuponher.

Summary1：主语是__________________名词

(aburst/wave/sense/feelingof+)表示情感状态的名词+有灵动词

表示“某人感到...”或“一阵/一种....向某人袭来”

常见表情绪的名词：_______________________________________________________________

常见的有灵谓语：___________________侵袭，突然控制__________________使哽咽

__________________使大受感动、涌上心头______________不知不觉地产生

________________紧抓________________袭来、席卷________________遗弃

________________撕碎______________吞淹没__________________击垮

_______________剥夺、使丧失_______________失去缺乏

Practice:1.一阵恐慌向她袭来。Awaveofpanic______her.

2.我抱着礼物，兴奋得什么话也说不出来。Iheldthepresent,andexcitement________mywords

3.她的焦虑把她撕成了碎片。（她焦虑不安）Anxiety_________