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高一年级(必修2)

Module2;如何写“吸烟的危害”的英语短文;注意：

1.短文须包括以上所有要点，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

2.词数：100左右。

【写作指导】

●审题定调：这是一篇关于“戒烟”的表格作文，行文主要用一般现在时。

●布局谋篇:全文按表格内容共分三段。;Para.1:列出现状(presentsituation):(1)不少学生吸烟，人数在增加；(2)某校2/5以上学生吸烟；(3)偷钱买烟。

Para.2:阐述危害(harms)(1)学生吸烟危害比成人更大；(2)有害于身体和心灵。

Para.3:建议(advice)：戒烟。;●常用表达:

抽烟现象：It’sreportedthat...;two-fifthsofthestudentsinaschool...;stealmoneytobuycigarettes;Mostofthemareyoungpeopleandevenmiddleschoolstudents.

吸烟危害：bemoreharmfultostudentsthantoadults;benotonlyharmfultoourhealthbutalsotoourminds;bebadfor;beaddictedto;causeallkindsofdisease;建议及看法：shouldn’tsmoke...;You’dbettergiveitup;Don’ttouch...;suggestyoushoulddo...

过渡词汇:what’sworse;therefore;asaresult;so;forexample;suchas;inmyopinion;inaword

相关词汇：smoker;non-smoker;heavysmoker;nicotine;drug;cancer;cigarette;tobacco,cocaine;addict;crime;criminal;harm;apleasure;abadhabit;health;awasteofmoney;【范文欣赏】

Students,giveupsmoking

Nowadays,manystudentssmokeandthenumberofstudentssmokingisstillincreasing.It’sreportedthattwo-fifthsofthestudentsinaschoolsmoke,andwhat’sworse,someofthestudentsstealmoneytobuycigarettes.; Asweknow,smokingismoreharmfultostudentsthantoadults.Theyoungerapersoniswhenhebeginstosmoke,themorelikelyheistodevelopnicotineaddiction.Smokingisnotonlyharmfultostudents’healthbutalsototheirminds.;Studentswhosmokearemorelikelytouseotherdrugsandgetinfights.

Inaword,asthebuildersofourcountryinthefuture,studentsshouldgiveupsmokingassoonaspossible.