Book 1 Unit 4 Natural Disasters 读后续写作业设计 (教师版).docx

Book1Unit4读后续写作业设计（教师版）

德兴市第一中学梁俊

I.课文素材库

微技能

语料

出处

场景/环境描写

Forseveraldays,thewaterinthevillagewellsroseandfell,roseandfell.

Thereweredeepcracksthatappearedinthewalls.

Chickensandevenpigsweretoonervoustoeat,anddogsrefusedtogoinsidebuildings.

Miceranoutofthefieldslookingforplacestohide,andfishjumpedoutofthewater.

Brightlightswereseenintheskyoutsidethecityandloudnoiseswereheard.

Ahugecrack,eightkilometreslongand30metreswide,cutacrosshouses,roads,andwaterways.

Inlessthanoneminute,alargecitylayinruins.

Everywheresurvivorslooked,therewasnothingbutruins.

Withstrongsupportfromthegovernmentandthetirelesseffortsofthecity’speople,anewTangshanwasbuiltupontheearthruins.

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心理描写

Butthecity’sonemillionpeoplewereasleepasususlthatnight.

Peoplewereinshock.

Peoplebegantowonderhowlongthedisasterwouldlast.

Buthopewasnotlost.

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修辞手法

Itseemedasiftheworldwerecomingtoanend!(夸张)

2.Hardhillsofrockbecameriversofdirt.(暗喻)

3.Brickscoveredthegroundlikeredautumnleaves,butnowindcouldblowthemaway.（明喻）

4.Slowly,thecitybegantobreatheagain.(拟人)

5.Tangshanstartedtoreviveitselfandgetbackuponitsfeet.(拟人)

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动作描写

Soonafterthequakes,thearmysent150,000soldierstoTangshantodigoutthosewhoweretrappedandtoburythedead.

Morethan10,000doctorsandnursescametoprovidemedicalcare.

Workersbuiltsheltersforsurvivorswhosehomeshadbeendestroyed.

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