思维建模助力快速破题：读后续写专题+课件-+-2025届高三下学期英语二轮复习专项.pptx

2025届二轮复习读后续写专题（一）思维建模助力快速破题

表达Expression内容Content衔接Coherence创造了丰富、合理的内容，富有逻辑性，读后续写完整，与原文情境融洽度高。使用了多样并且恰当的词汇和语法结构，可能有个别小错，但完全不影响理解。有效地使用了语句衔接手段，全文结构清晰，意义连贯。第五档作文21-25分AnalysetheDetailedGradingRules评分细则解读思维路径探究课前习作修改学习成果分享

创造了丰富、合理的内容，富有逻辑性，读后续写完整，与原文情境融洽度高。第五档作文21-25分AnalysetheDetailedGradingRules评分细则解读思维路径探究课前习作修改学习成果分享1.关键信息与原文协同Q1:Isthebasicinformationconsistentwiththeoriginalstory?2.主题准确Q2:Isthestorythemeappropriate?3.故事情节和发展节奏合理Q3:Istheplotappropriate?内容Content

课前习作修改学习成果分享课前习题回顾Countingthevotestookaboutfiveminutes,butformeitseemedlikeanhourandahalf.Captainofthecheerleadingteamisquiteanaccomplishmentforaneighthgraderlikeme.AsCoachMaguireemergedfromheroffice,Iinchedtotheedgeofmyseatreadytospringtomyfeetassoonasshesaidmyname.Ilivedforcheerleading.PuttingonthatredandwhiteuniformonSaturdaysandmarchingontothefieldmeansprideandconfidencethatcarriedovertoeveryotherclassandactivitythatcamemyway.“Girls,”?shebegan,“itismypleasuretoannouncethatTerryShawhasbeenelectedCaptainoftheHolyCrossSchoolcheerleadingteam.”?Aloudcheerwasheardthroughoutthegym,butallIcoulddowastocontainmyjealousy.IdidntknowifIwasgoingtothrowuporpassout.Howcouldthisbe?Ihadntmissedapracticeoragameinthreeyears.DidnttheyrealizeIhadmyheartsetonthis?Afterafewminutes,IwalkedovertoTerryonshakylegsandmanageda“Goodluck,Terry”?inawhisper.Terryhuggedmetightlyandsaid,“Iwasntexpectingthis,Annie.Whatashock!”?Ididntpushherawaybutinmyheart,Iwantedto.Thenextmorning,Imarchedovertomyclosetandtookoutmyuniform.HeartbrokenasIwas,mytruelovewascheeringwithmyteammates.Howharditwastogotothatfirstpractice!WhenIarrived,rightawayCoachMaguireaskedmetotakethreeofthenewgirlsandworkonourbasicmoves.Terrywasassignedthreenewgirls